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CotM - Mar. 2010
Character of the Month
Prince Caspian

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Played by Cara

"Cara has managed to...create a character that is both mythical and life-like. Impulsive, moody, and yet kind and good-hearted, Caspian is just beginning to show the makings of a true leader."
Character of the Month Archive
Last 15 Shouts:
April 11, 2010, 09:07:48 PM
*wanders in an away-from-them-wardly direction*
April 06, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
Irritations indeed... *growls and sits on the ground, holding her head*
April 04, 2010, 08:10:18 PM
Alright, let's avoid fighting among ourselves. Save those irritations for the battlefield.
April 02, 2010, 11:25:42 PM
*grabs at the throbbing ache in her head* You! This hasn't a thing to do with you unless you're about ready to hand over my weapon! *groans cause it REALLY hurt* You... *slouches against a tree*
April 02, 2010, 11:24:35 PM
Angry It was just a little fun, lighten up. (rubs his cheek) You're lucky you're a lady, else I'd have boxed your ears.
April 02, 2010, 11:23:03 PM
D:< (swats Arina upside the head)
April 02, 2010, 11:20:46 PM
I do believe I was well within my rights, making unfounded accusations! And I could have very well hit him with something else if some feathered maiden hadn't snatched away my bow!
April 02, 2010, 11:19:11 PM
>:/ That was completely uncalled for.
April 02, 2010, 11:18:42 PM
:O
April 02, 2010, 11:18:21 PM
*slaps the despicable de la Braose man*
April 02, 2010, 11:15:48 PM
XD
April 02, 2010, 11:12:38 PM
Young WHAT?! *please imagine a rather screechy voice as she thinks of a way to kill person*
April 02, 2010, 11:07:17 PM
Ahh, young love Grin
April 02, 2010, 10:26:40 PM
-grins-
April 02, 2010, 10:08:49 PM
*scowls and says through clenched teeth* I believe I disagree.
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anyagal14
« Reply #0 on: November 23, 2009, 06:45:32 PM »

Is this application done? Character appearance is missing. I'd also like to see you choose more specific dislikes than "evil" or "hatred." Most people (even those on the "wrong" side) don't think themselves "evil" or "hateful." (Hah. I can't even imagine the people I don't get along with proclaiming "I love evil!") Also, I don't know how sharks (and other animals) are a weakness. I think we're looking more for character flaws. I think almost everyone is susceptible to violence from animals. (Is that terribly pessimistic of me to say? Smiley ) Your "Scares easily" is more along the lines of what we're looking for.

Is she naive? Weak-willed and easy to influence? Too abrupt in talking to others? Prone to daydreaming and losing touch with reality?

The rest looks really good! Let me know when this is done!
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