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CotM - Mar. 2010
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Prince Caspian

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Played by Cara

"Cara has managed to...create a character that is both mythical and life-like. Impulsive, moody, and yet kind and good-hearted, Caspian is just beginning to show the makings of a true leader."
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Last 15 Shouts:
April 11, 2010, 09:07:48 PM
*wanders in an away-from-them-wardly direction*
April 06, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
Irritations indeed... *growls and sits on the ground, holding her head*
April 04, 2010, 08:10:18 PM
Alright, let's avoid fighting among ourselves. Save those irritations for the battlefield.
April 02, 2010, 11:25:42 PM
*grabs at the throbbing ache in her head* You! This hasn't a thing to do with you unless you're about ready to hand over my weapon! *groans cause it REALLY hurt* You... *slouches against a tree*
April 02, 2010, 11:24:35 PM
Angry It was just a little fun, lighten up. (rubs his cheek) You're lucky you're a lady, else I'd have boxed your ears.
April 02, 2010, 11:23:03 PM
D:< (swats Arina upside the head)
April 02, 2010, 11:20:46 PM
I do believe I was well within my rights, making unfounded accusations! And I could have very well hit him with something else if some feathered maiden hadn't snatched away my bow!
April 02, 2010, 11:19:11 PM
>:/ That was completely uncalled for.
April 02, 2010, 11:18:42 PM
:O
April 02, 2010, 11:18:21 PM
*slaps the despicable de la Braose man*
April 02, 2010, 11:15:48 PM
XD
April 02, 2010, 11:12:38 PM
Young WHAT?! *please imagine a rather screechy voice as she thinks of a way to kill person*
April 02, 2010, 11:07:17 PM
Ahh, young love Grin
April 02, 2010, 10:26:40 PM
-grins-
April 02, 2010, 10:08:49 PM
*scowls and says through clenched teeth* I believe I disagree.
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Kitsune
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« on: November 16, 2009, 07:29:13 AM »

Please do not respond until I say I am finished
About You
Name: rocklobster
Age: 34
How did you find us: I googled Narnia RP's and found this site.
Rules Password: [Password Accepted ~Melissa]
Character Basics
Full Name:Kitsune
Alias(es)/Nickname(s): (if your character has any)
Gender: Female
Age:10 (in fox years)
Species: fox
Status/Title: (can be job/title/what have you)
Affiliation: Narnia

Character Appearance
Hair/Fur/Feathers:orange fur with white paws
Eyes: Green
Overall: Kitsune looks like any ordinary fox.  She stands about 3 feet tall and weighs seventy pounds.  She has a bushy tail with a white tuft at the top.  One of her ears has a scar she got when she was still a cub.
Portrayal:

Character Personality
Likes: drawing
kindness
chess
fish (as food)
her den
Dislikes: humans
violence
owls
hawks
eagles
Strengths: even-tempered
makes friends easily
has minimal knowledge of how to fend for herself
can hide very well
has a keen mind
Weaknesses: startled by flying creatures (especially birds of prey)
does not like to fight
gullible
still hung up about her scar
lacks confidence
General Personality:Kitsune is generally kind-hearted.  She has a pretty decent temper.  She basically just wants friends.  She lives by the golden rule.
     Kitsune has never been one for violence.  However, if she feels there is no other alternative, she will fight.  She has only recently started fending for herself, and does not have much experience.
     When she was a cub, she got colored pencils as a Christmas present.  She draws in her spare time and is actually quite good at it.  She also learned chess and is moderate at it.  She doesn't care if she wins or loses.  She just likes to compete.
Character History
Family: has 2 parents, both of which are deceased.  She has three brothers and two sisters.
General History:Kitsune was born to a family of eight, including her parents, Jasper and Vixey.  Her parents did not like the typical assumptions that foxes are common thieves and did their best to teach their children that stealing and dishonesty were not tolerated.

From an early age, Kitsune learned as much about how to survive on her own as she could.  She learned how to fish and fix food.  She also learned about Narnia's history.  Her artistic talent was mostly self-taught.  Her oldest brother, Todd taught her how to play chess.

When Kitsune turned eight years old, a group of Calormene hunters raided the forest where her family lived.  Her parents died while they defended theden from the hunters.  She still has nightmares about it.  What gnaws at her the most is that she was so frightened at the time that she was unable to act.  This has instilled in her a slight distrust of most humans.
Kitsune soon came of age to fend for herself.  She found a little den and has lived there ever since.  She does not like the fact tat she is alone, but has decided to make the best of it.
Lately, Kitsune has gone through some changes.  She has come to believe that she must take a stand for Narnia and return it to the paradise she remembers from her childhood.  However she still sees herself as a timid creature and does not yet realize that she has a hidden courageous fire within her that is merely waiting to burn.
Other/Notes: (Is there anything else we should know about your character?)
Sample
RP Sample: Kitsune awoke to an ordinary day.  She stretched out her paws and decided to go get some breakfast.
As she crawled out of her home, she smelled a familiar scent.  She smiled because she knew exactly who it was.  She saw her oldest brother, Todd and ran to greet him.
"Todd, what brings you to my home?" she asked happily.
"My feet, of course." her brother replied.  "But seriously, I heard that this is where you were living, so I thought I'd see how you were living.  How long has it been now?"
"At least a year."  said Kitsune.  "Shall I show you around?"
"Well, I guess it wouldn't hurt." said Todd.
They both entered her den.  He saw several drawings on the walls.
"I see you still draw." said Todd.
"Yeah, it keeps me busy." Kitsune shrugged.
Kitsune's stomach growled.  She realized she'd better go back to getting her breakfast.
"I'm sorry, Todd, but I need to get some food." she said.
"Hey, I can help.  It'll be just like when we were cubs." Todd offerred.
They climbed out of the den and walked over to a lake.  They could see fish swimming around the lake.  It seemed like a good place to start.
"Want to go first?" Todd asked.  "This is your territory after all."
They climbed onto a log and peered down into thelake.
Kitsune spied a fish and swiped a paw at the water.  She immediately caught a fish and swatted it onto the bank.    She repeated the process several more times, until she got five fish onto the bank.
"All right, Todd. how about you give it a turn?" she said as she went back to get her fish so she could cook them.
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anyagal14
« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2009, 10:59:07 AM »

This application looks very good but I'd like to hear just a bit more before I approve it.

You say, for instance, that Kitsune dislikes "evil." I think most people would agree that they don't like evil, regardless of what side they are on. Evil's a very relative term. What does Kitsune think is evil?

Additionally, you mention in the history that her parents did not want her children to have the negative stereotypes of foxes. What are they and how did Kitsune avoid them? I get a good sense of her hobbies and abilities from her history but no major life events. You said her parents are deceased -- how did that happen and how did that affect Kitsune?

The history should also maybe include some indication of how she might become involved in the fray. Has she heard anything about the Telmarine-Narnian conflict? Is she planning on joining Aslan's camp?

I'd love to hear these details and then I can look at this application again. Thanks!
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anyagal14
« Reply #2 on: November 21, 2009, 10:43:25 PM »

Alright, the changes you've made look good! I would consider revising "evil" still as it seems vague and not as descriptive as it could be, but other than that, I think we can safely say this profile is hereby
Accepted!
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