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Prince Caspian

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"Cara has managed to...create a character that is both mythical and life-like. Impulsive, moody, and yet kind and good-hearted, Caspian is just beginning to show the makings of a true leader."
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Last 15 Shouts:
April 11, 2010, 09:07:48 PM
*wanders in an away-from-them-wardly direction*
April 06, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
Irritations indeed... *growls and sits on the ground, holding her head*
April 04, 2010, 08:10:18 PM
Alright, let's avoid fighting among ourselves. Save those irritations for the battlefield.
April 02, 2010, 11:25:42 PM
*grabs at the throbbing ache in her head* You! This hasn't a thing to do with you unless you're about ready to hand over my weapon! *groans cause it REALLY hurt* You... *slouches against a tree*
April 02, 2010, 11:24:35 PM
Angry It was just a little fun, lighten up. (rubs his cheek) You're lucky you're a lady, else I'd have boxed your ears.
April 02, 2010, 11:23:03 PM
D:< (swats Arina upside the head)
April 02, 2010, 11:20:46 PM
I do believe I was well within my rights, making unfounded accusations! And I could have very well hit him with something else if some feathered maiden hadn't snatched away my bow!
April 02, 2010, 11:19:11 PM
>:/ That was completely uncalled for.
April 02, 2010, 11:18:42 PM
:O
April 02, 2010, 11:18:21 PM
*slaps the despicable de la Braose man*
April 02, 2010, 11:15:48 PM
XD
April 02, 2010, 11:12:38 PM
Young WHAT?! *please imagine a rather screechy voice as she thinks of a way to kill person*
April 02, 2010, 11:07:17 PM
Ahh, young love Grin
April 02, 2010, 10:26:40 PM
-grins-
April 02, 2010, 10:08:49 PM
*scowls and says through clenched teeth* I believe I disagree.
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Mara Serenity JOHNSON
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« on: January 28, 2009, 05:21:53 PM »

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Name: Kay
Age: 14
How did you find us: Just by googling... I was looking for a good Narnia site.
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Character Basics
Name: Mara Serenity Johnson
Alias(es)/Nickname(s): Sere, Mara
Gender: Female
Age: 1,315 (Doesn't age)
Race: Dryad
Status/Title: Peacekeeper
Affiliation: Narnia

Character Appearance
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Hazel
Distinguishing marks: Birthmark of vines twining on both legs, from ankle to knee.
Portrayal: AnnaSophia Robb


Character Personality
Likes:
+ Dancing
+ Horseback Riding
+ Laughing
+ Fooling Around
+ Having Fun
+ Boys
Dislikes:
- War
- Violence
- Pain
- Jealousy
- Lack of Emotion
- Secrecy
Strengths:
> Calmness
> Fluidness
> Martial Arts
> Hand to Hand Combat
> Love
Weaknesses:
< Hatred
< Long Range
< Sword-Fighting
< Archery
< Chaos

General Personality: Mara is a bold-hearted girl. She is very much likable and has a kind side to her. Whoever meet might say that she is a little off, but good to the heart. She has a drum of her own beat. Making waves was what she does best and never turning back is a rule of hers. Making friends was never hard for her, almost everyone in Verona Forest says she is the sweetest dryad they had ever met.

Laughing and making other people laugh is her specialty. In good company, she always had the crowd on their backs by the end of their visit. Though there is a serious side to Mara. Whenever she has a troubled friend, she listens to what they have to say from hers and he or she's point of view. Almost everyone she knows comes to her for advice. She always knows what to say and when to say it. Understanding others is an accomplishment of hers.

Never has she once misunderstood a person, and even if she did, she would ask them to explain. Mara can keep a secret and knows when not to. Her middlename isn't Serenity for nothing, she always seems to have her emotions in check, but does like to express herself a lot. She does that through her art and dance. Painting pictures of all types of landscapes and learning all different kinds of dances. Mara is a moderately out-going person, but can clam up sometimes. But overall she cares and people care back because of that.

Character History
Parents: Tree Gods
Siblings: All other Dryads

General History: Mara was never normal to begin with. But that didn't bother her. Her first few years in her tree, and the other Dryads had noticed that she had a vast imagination. Being a free-thinker, Mara learned quickly from the other Dryads, and things around her. Over the next corse of the year, her mind had expanded far beyond someone for at her age. Everything she said seemed to make sense instantly, she never had to explain things to the people around her, for they could understand her completely. But that was before all the trees shut themselves up to the world. After that, she only thought to herself, having never even seperated from her small oak sapling.

The next few years had been hard, some of her siblings had died. Word had been sent by the woodland creatures. She had overheard a pair of chipmunks talking about them. But no one can last forever... can they? In her pursuit to make things right again, she grew depressed and weary. Another thing that wasn't normal. How she was going to make things right, she did not know. Mara was only a stupid little Dryad stuck in her tree. Winters were fiercer and summers were almost unbearable for her. How was she supposed to survive to even change a thing? For all she knew her brothers and sisters could have died from natural causes. But they were healthy the last time I heard them! It didn't make any sense. If someone had killed them, why and who? She was getting angry now. Maybe they were accidentally knocked over by a giant? But Mara hadn't seen a giant in ages.

What could be happening? Is it fate? Or maybe an illness that is spreading amoungst the other Dryads, that hasn't reached me or my friends? Finally Mara couldn't take it any longer. Her anger turned into blind fury, she was so used to being calm and collected about everything, that nothing seemed right anymore. Mara's heart broke into an uneven beat... But trees don't have hearts... Suddenly she saw through hazel-colored bright eyes, breathed through two nostrils, tasted through her pink tongue.

Her hair was a golden blonde, skin an earthy yet pale tone. Mara was slender and tall. She felt through her new hands and feet, everything. Smiling for the first time, she took a step. A human step. Well, still a Dryad step. She turned and saw the tree that she was bound to, and saw that it was slender and tall too. "Amazing..." Mara whispered, then shouted, "AMAZING!" Hearing her new-found voice echo. "Thank you!" Mara yelled at no one in particular.

She wandered about for a couple of hours, and finally decided her fate. She was to head toward Telmar.

Other/Notes: The sound of her voice can calm anyone who wants to be calmed.

Sample
RP Sample: Mara leaped from rock to rock. She was amazingly strong for someone who had just walked her first steps only a couple of hours ago. She looked at the running river beneath her. She was headed toward Telmar, where word had come that the Prince had been killed. Mara couldn't even imagine the possibilities that were sure to arrive. After she actually thought the whole "go-to-Telmar-to-see-if-the-Prince-really-was-killed" plan through, she decided that it would be better for her to stick to Verona Forest, though Mara did want to explore and get closer to more civilization. So she kept on her way to Telmar,but finally made the decision of Going near the edge of the forest, nearest the Telmarine's castle.

Dancing around, Mara spotted a little wood thrush. "Hey little buddy, what are you doing out here all alone?" When it didn't answer, she became puzzled. "Are you sick? Or maybe hurt?" But the bird just cocked its' head to the side. It didn't seem sick or hurt. "Why won't you speak? All the other thrush's I've met have chatted to me, and I could chat to them all day long!" The thrush flitted off from where it was, on a huge pine tree branch. Hurt and confused, Mara walked along. That was strange, it's like the bird couldn't understand me. Something in her gut told her that the bird really couldn't speak. Psh, that's crazy, maybe it was just too shy to say anything! Shrugging, she continued to dance, twirling around with joy, until she got dizzy. In her couple of hours as human, well, dryad-human? she had talked to everyone she could. All of the creatures had talked back to her, except the wood thrush. Laughing, Mara thought, Well, I guess I should've known that people get that strange sensation when they spin around. I mean, I saw Rabbit do it at least a dozen times, after he saw that cute Hare! Shaking her head at the thought, Mara started to run, testing her new legs was probably a good idea before she met other people, so she didn't look like an idiot, or a fish out of water.

Running felt so exhilarating to her, it was magical. Like a kind of high in energy, without the need of that nasty plant she saw some people use, especially one naughty knome. Frowning, she knew that she would have helped him if she could have. He was just in too deep! He didn't even listen to reason, and all that bad stuff I heard about it. Mara sighed, that was all behind her now. Her new life had begun and with it a new sense of happiness. Still running, she dodged a tree in her way. Slowing to a jog, most people would have been breathless after a run like that, but she hadn't even broken a sweat. Atleast I know my legs work correctly, and better than I would have thought! Smiling at herself, she wondered what this new life would bring.
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« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2009, 05:24:34 PM »

Hi there! Just as a note, before you get too far on this: if your character is going to be a dryad, make sure you address the reason why she's not asleep like most of the other dryads in Narnia at this time. Also, your status/title would be more like what her job/role is.

I look forward to seeing your completed app!
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« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2009, 05:31:09 PM »

Oops! Alright then... I'll make changes! Yes, lots of changes! Wink
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« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2009, 10:19:03 PM »

Hey there!  I can't quite accept this yet, mainly for canon and consistency reasons.  Those are listed here:

-How does Mara know that her siblings are dead if she can't see them?
-All of the tree gods/tree spirits/dryads are asleep at this point, and so a tree god wouldn't have the ability to wake her (and the tree gods aren't really like what you have here anyway). Frankly, I don't care if she just suddenly woke up on her own for some reason. The reason she's awake doesn't have to make complete sense for me at least, as long as you aren't assuming there are lots of dryads out and about.
-When did she awake? From her personality, it seems as if it's been at least a little while, as she's interacted with others already. So if she has been awake awhile, what has she done since she was awakened? And what happened before she left her tree?  IMO, this is actually the main thing that needs to be fixed in your app. Your history section basically just tells about one event in Mara's life, and it really should be rather more comprehensive.

So just give those things another look. Then let me know when you're done making the changes, and I'll gladly take another look at your app! Cheesy
 
P.S. As a side note, you can read more about Narnian dryads here and/or here.
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« Reply #4 on: February 01, 2009, 02:39:49 PM »

Hmmm... I guess I can call it done now. Smiley
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« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2009, 03:47:27 PM »

I like the changes you made! However, you still didn't really address my third point. Basically, can you expand on the history? I know she hasn't been out of her tree too long, but I think you can still mention what happened before and after the main event you describe. You do have the required three paragraphs, so length isn't an issue, but we do like to have a general idea of everything that's happened in a character's life.

So fix that up, and then I should be able to approve your app!
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« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2009, 05:30:26 PM »

Just so you know, the trees have been silent for a couple hundred years. Mara could be that old (trees and therefore Dryads live much longer than humans), but you'd have to change her age.  So you could just change her age, or maybe she thought while she was in her tree, learned from things she heard around her, but maybe didn't actually interact with anyone? It's your character, so do what you'd like.

I'm off to a Superbowl party right now, but I'll gladly take a look at this again tonight!
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« Reply #7 on: February 01, 2009, 09:34:55 PM »

Well, Dryads do live only as long as their tree, and most trees don't live to be over a thousand (though some certainly do!). But your character does seem younger personality-wise (though having been inside her tree for so long could maybe explain that). So maybe just say she's 315?  However, while I think it would be better if you changed that, you've waited long enough and I think that I'm going to go ahead and say that this application is

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